Thursday, 10 April 2014

Self Directed Disposinon

WALT: Independently make good decisions about my learning.


Tuesday, 8 April 2014

Monday, 7 April 2014

Earth Boards At Camp

WALT: Entertain
Task: Write about what we were scared about at camp or what we really enjoyed.
Reflection: I wrote 4 drafts about camp. successes
Successes Criteria:  
Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)
  • use a range of verbs
  • use a variety of adverbs
Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)
  • select 2 - 3 similes
  • select 2 - 3 metaphors or personification
  • choose onomatopoeia to show sounds (crash!)
  • select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)
Sentences
  • use short sentences to create suspense
Structure
  • use 3 - 5 paragraphs.

Camp
 Draft 1

The time has come.
It's our turn I sprint towards the boards as soon as I see them I think they look really dangerous.
My heart is pounding. I try to stop my-self from shaking.

Then our parent arrives she says,"hop on the boards'' we snatch the boards. We start on a small hill.
They are so FUN!!



Draft 2

The time has come.
It's our turn I sprint towards the boards as soon as I see them I think they look really dangerous, with their giant wheels and skinny wood, I imagine myself crashing right into a big fat rock ow! Then our parent arrives she says "hop on the boards'' we grab the boards, my heart is pounding like cheaters. We start on the grass it's only a small hill. The board is telling me to go down the hill right NOW! but I ignore it. I go down the hill and hold on tight, this is so FUN!


Draft three

 The time has come.
It's our turn I sprint towards the boards as soon as I see them I think they look really dangerous with their giant wheels, skinny wood and they had nothing to steer or hold on to! Can you believe it!
Then  Emma our camp parent arrives. She says ''hop on the boards" we grab the boards we start on a small hill but still my heart is pounding like a cheaters. I go down the hill OMG this is so fun.

Draft 4

The time has come it's finally our turn.
As I sprint towards the boards, I stop in my foot-steps, they look really dangerous with their giant wheels, skinny wood and they had nothing to steer with or hold onto. I continue to run towards the boards. Then our camp parent arrives, Emma, she says ''hop on the boards'' we grab the boards we go to the hill it is only a small hill and it's on grass but still my heart is pounding like a cheeta's. We go down the hill  I stay for a little bit then I hear the board say "hurry up'', I go down the hill and hold on tight, OMG, they are so FUN!!!!!!!!


Draft 5


The time has come it's finally our turn.
As I sprint towards the boards, I stop in my foot-steps, they look really dangerous with their giant wheels, skinny wood and they had nothing to steer with or hold onto. I continue to run towards the boards then suddenly out of now where our camp parent arrives, Emma, she says ''hop on the boards'' we grab the boards we go to the hill it is only a small hill and it's on grass but still my heart is pounding, like a cheetas ready to pounce on it's pray. The others go down the hill I stay for a little bit then I hear the board say "hurry up, go down the hill I want to have some fun'', But I snap back at it and say "NO" I go down the hill and hold on tight, OMG, they are so FUN!!!!!!!!




swimming sports

WALT: Evaluate our learning honestly
Task: Reflect on your efforts at swimming sports day
Success Criteria:
Use an image here.
Answer questions


Use correct spelling and punctuation.
Ask your learning partner to write you some feedback.
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What are you most proud of at swimming sports and why?
That I came first in all my races and I tried my best.

What challenged you the most and Why?
I slipped when the horn went off so I needed to cath up.

How did you show kotahitanga?
When my friend got into the finals but she was dreast all ready and I helped her get throgh that.

Next time, what is a goal you can work towards?
swimming abit faster.

Peer Comment: Thats right Tabitha you came first in all the races! Plus I think you did a very very good job & you tried you best I belive in you, Next year you should lengths because your ready for it!

Good Luck 

Zara



Wednesday, 2 April 2014

Group Presentainon

WALT: Research

Task: find out about wetas.

Reflection: I think I could make sure the thing is set to on click.

Success Criteria: Know your stuff speak with a load voice make sure evrey member participates. 
    
Go on this link to see my group presentation about wetas.

http://youtu.be/tSXJMsIG8ac

Buddy Swimming

WALT: Evaluate
Task: Have fun
Reflection: I think I should have spent more time with my buddy.
Yesterday we had buddy swimming with sensational seven wich is my buddy class. We had so much fun.


Team Tactics

 WALT: Use what we know and then fill in the gaps. we had to fill in all the gaps on this sheet and then anwer the questions.

Kotahitanga At Camp

 WALT: Show kotahitanga.
Task: Make a post that shows Kotahitanga
Reflection: I was successful.  
Succss Criteria: Use photos to share our experiences at camp, and use text to explain kotahitanga.